Eloquintly creepy. A nice read. M. K. A. Marble | 1Feb12 | More
Pretty good read. Fear the Megalith! Tony | 31Jan12 | More
ohhhhhhh creepy and pretty awesome i loved it!!!!!!!!! natalie | 30Jan12 | More
ohhhhhhh creepy and pretty awsome!!!!!!!!!! natalie | 30Jan12 | More
Who can you trust when you can't trust yourself???? Sherry | 28Jan12 | More
Very detailed and creative. I enjoyed reading it and the level of suspense that it holds. Chris | 27Jan12 | More
Wow great story Aaron! That was a pretty cool twist at the end there. Definitely didn't see that coming at ... John | 27Jan12 | More
I like that there were witicisms on the zombie's door and the hero's take on cannibalism entering the porn industry. ... M. K. A. Marble | 24Jan12 | More
I really like the way you describe the surroundings and the characters. Your writing flows nicely. Keep up the good ... M. K. A. Marble | 24Jan12 | More
Very engrossing. Good job. Nice job with the twist at the end M. K. A. Marble | 24Jan12 | More